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		<title>How to Improve Your Copywriting: Nuts &amp; Bolts Examples</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Oct 2008 03:09:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Elge</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I hate it when books and articles on copywriting make lists of suggestions without examples. I think they do that because it&#8217;s easier to make suggestions than keep track of actual examples. So, today when I was working on editing some articles that will be used in article marketing for a client, I kept track [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hate it when books and articles on copywriting make lists of suggestions without examples. I think they do that because it&#8217;s easier to make suggestions than keep track of actual examples. So, today when I was working on editing some articles that will be used in article marketing for a client, I kept track of the suggestions and the examples.</p>
<p><strong>Start with the solution instead of ending with it. </strong>Often, sentences flow better if you start with the solution.<br />
<blockquote><em><strong>Original:</strong></em> One of the best sources for you find ideas to aid you operating your ranch in the most affordable ways would be the Internet.<br /><em><strong>Updated:</strong></em> The internet is one of the best sources for finding ideas to help you operate your ranch affordably.</p></blockquote>
<p><strong>Be mindful in the use of pronouns like “it” or “this”</strong> especially at the beginning of a sentence. These words are vague and can lead to confusion. Sometimes when I come across them I find myself thinking “Huh? Or “What are you referring to?” Many times you can replace pronouns with a more specific word or phrase that makes the sentence clearer. You can also replace vague pronouns with key words or phrases which helps improves your rankings. In the example below, I replaced the word “it” with what “it” is referring to. Doing so makes for a more understandable sentence.<br />
<blockquote><em><strong>Original:</strong></em> Many ranch owners had ranching or farming experience in their past or in previous generations of their family and assume this makes them able to profitably run a ranch. It doesn’t necessarily mean they will be successful because profitable ranching practices are constantly evolving.<br /><em><strong>Updated:</strong></em> Many ranch owners had ranching or farming experience in their past or in previous generations of their family and assume this makes them able to profitably run a ranch. However, previous experience does not ensure future success because profitable ranching practices are constantly evolving.</p></blockquote>
<p><strong>Break up run on sentences.</strong> They slow the reader down and can be a bail out point which works against your goals. It can be hard to identify a run on sentence when you write it. Reading your articles out loud will help you find them.<br />
<blockquote><em><strong>Original:</strong></em> There are numerous reasons this may well be the best route for you to consider if you are hoping to get a huge return on your ranch investment and you should have this in mind when you’re looking at ranches for sale.<br /><em><strong>Updated:</strong></em> There are numerous reasons this may well be the best route for you to consider if you are hoping to get a good return on your ranch investment. Plus, you should have this in mind when you’re looking at ranches for sale.</p></blockquote>
<p><strong>Two for one example.</strong> The phrase “key to doing so” makes me think “Key to doing what?” and this sentence is a run on.<br />
<blockquote><em><strong>Original:</strong></em> The key to doing so can be as easy as taking the time to do some extensive research that will pay huge dividends for you in the future when it comes to ranch management, and this is something you should consider as early as the time you’re looking at ranches for sale.<br /><em><strong>Updated:</strong></em> The key to effective ranch management can be as easy as taking the time to do some detailed research. This is something you should consider as early as the time you’re looking at ranches for sale.</p></blockquote>
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